If you hope to find someone worth while from your add, you'll need to work on it more:
Refer to:
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=25934
and
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=22916
For basic info on making a decent add.
And look here for examples of good advertisements:
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=69251