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View Poll Results: Is This Story Moving too Fast Or too Slow? And Too Detailed Or Not Detailed Enough? | |||
Too Fast/Too Detailed | 4 | 4.44% | |
Too Fast/Not Detailed Enough | 0 | 0% | |
Too Fast/Just Enough Detail | 1 | 1.11% | |
Too Slow/Too Detailed | 3 | 3.33% | |
Too Slow/Not Detailed Enough | 6 | 6.67% | |
Too Slow/Just Enough Detail | 4 | 4.44% | |
Right Speed/Too Detailed | 0 | 0% | |
Right Speed/Not Enough Detail | 13 | 14.44% | |
Right Speed/Just Enough Detail | 59 | 65.56% | |
Voters: 90. You may not vote on this poll |
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01-23-2010, 07:50 AM | #15 |
getDare Devil
Join Date: Dec 2009
Location: In the US
Posts: 1,012
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This story is excellent. I hope you continue writing it.
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"How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare! |
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