Fiction: summer holidays

cornylad · 02-07-2010, 12:39 PM

It was the last day of school and Ruby and Matt were sitting in their lesson waiting for it to end. They decided to have a conversation

Ruby: so Matt what you got planned for the summer?
Matt: Not sure really, was thinking going on holiday for a week, working and apart from that not really sure.
Ruby: Nice where uyou thinking of going?
Matt: Not sure, maybe Thailand
Ruby: That be nice i hear its quite nice over there, well your more than wellcome to come over to my house during the summer if you want, hear my number *she gives him her number*
Matt:Thanks and hear is mine *he give her his*
Ruby: many thanks, so what you doing tomorrow?
Matt: nothing yet
Ruby: well do you want to come over, i'm having some friends over aswell, both males and females, but i bet you be glad to hear that most be female *She giggles*
Matt: ok many thanks, what time?
Ruby: 10 am?
Matt: Yer thats fine
* the bell then rings for end of lesson and the end of school, so they both rush out school*
Matt: Hey Ruby where shall i meet you?
Ruby: My house, 45 Kinganton road
Matt: Cool see you at 10 am
Ruby: yer and my parents away for weekend so you can sleep over if you want
Matt: Really, Thanks
Ruby: No problems *She giggles in an evil way and runs off*

*Matt if left wondering why did she do that evil giggle, what be installed for him, should i go tomorrow?, he sleeps on it over night and wakes up next morning and have shower and pack bags. He went to wall out the door and he thought?.......*

(to be continued. What did you all think of that opening, of my first story?)

02-07-2010, 12:39 PM	#1
cornylad Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 178	summer holidays It was the last day of school and Ruby and Matt were sitting in their lesson waiting for it to end. They decided to have a conversation Ruby: so Matt what you got planned for the summer? Matt: Not sure really, was thinking going on holiday for a week, working and apart from that not really sure. Ruby: Nice where uyou thinking of going? Matt: Not sure, maybe Thailand Ruby: That be nice i hear its quite nice over there, well your more than wellcome to come over to my house during the summer if you want, hear my number she gives him her number Matt:Thanks and hear is mine he give her his Ruby: many thanks, so what you doing tomorrow? Matt: nothing yet Ruby: well do you want to come over, i'm having some friends over aswell, both males and females, but i bet you be glad to hear that most be female She giggles Matt: ok many thanks, what time? Ruby: 10 am? Matt: Yer thats fine * the bell then rings for end of lesson and the end of school, so they both rush out school* Matt: Hey Ruby where shall i meet you? Ruby: My house, 45 Kinganton road Matt: Cool see you at 10 am Ruby: yer and my parents away for weekend so you can sleep over if you want Matt: Really, Thanks Ruby: No problems She giggles in an evil way and runs off Matt if left wondering why did she do that evil giggle, what be installed for him, should i go tomorrow?, he sleeps on it over night and wakes up next morning and have shower and pack bags. He went to wall out the door and he thought?....... (to be continued. What did you all think of that opening, of my first story?)