[Fiction] summer holidays

[cornylad]

It was the last day of school and Ruby and Matt were sitting in their lesson waiting for it to end. They decided to have a conversation

Ruby: so Matt what you got planned for the summer?
Matt: Not sure really, was thinking going on holiday for a week, working and apart from that not really sure.
Ruby: Nice where uyou thinking of going?
Matt: Not sure, maybe Thailand
Ruby: That be nice i hear its quite nice over there, well your more than wellcome to come over to my house during the summer if you want, hear my number *she gives him her number*
Matt:Thanks and hear is mine *he give her his*
Ruby: many thanks, so what you doing tomorrow?
Matt: nothing yet
Ruby: well do you want to come over, i'm having some friends over aswell, both males and females, but i bet you be glad to hear that most be female *She giggles*
Matt: ok many thanks, what time?
Ruby: 10 am?
Matt: Yer thats fine
* the bell then rings for end of lesson and the end of school, so they both rush out school*
Matt: Hey Ruby where shall i meet you?
Ruby: My house, 45 Kinganton road
Matt: Cool see you at 10 am
Ruby: yer and my parents away for weekend so you can sleep over if you want
Matt: Really, Thanks
Ruby: No problems *She giggles in an evil way and runs off*

*Matt if left wondering why did she do that evil giggle, what be installed for him, should i go tomorrow?, he sleeps on it over night and wakes up next morning and have shower and pack bags. He went to wall out the door and he thought?.......*


(to be continued. What did you all think of that opening, of my first story?)

[andrew_b]

cool you got started, interested to see where this is going and i like your writing style

[cornylad]

*Matt arrives at Ruby's house just before 10 am, Ruby's friends Pillippa and Lucinda had allready arrived, Matt knocks the door*

*ruby opens the door*
Ruby: Oh Hey Matt *she smiles* come in, everyone else as arrived
*Matt walks in place his bags on the floor and walk into the lounge he saw the other two girls and he froze after realizing he was the only male at the party*
Ruby: so would you like a drink Matt?
Matt: Yes please
*Ruby gets a larger out the fridge and hands it to Matt*
Ruby: So do you guys want to play Truth or Dare?
*they all say yes, so they all sit in a circle then Ruby starts off*
Ruby: Matt, Truth or Dare?
*Matt thinks for a minute after comign out with*
Matt: Dare
Ruby: Ok, i dare you to get in the middle of the circle and do a strip teasefor us *the girls giggle*
Matt: and if i refuse?
Lucinda: then you have o go out the front, strip naked, and then run around the block of houses, making sure u go to the main road
Matt: erm k
*he gets up and stand in the cirlcle and does a strip tease, as he does the girls whistle and howl*
Matt: Lucinda truth or dare?
Lucinda: Truth
Matt: Who do you fancy more, Ruby or Phillippa?
Lucinda: can't you be involved in the question?
Matt:No and with that u answered if if u weere so ruby or phillippa?
Lucinda: Phillippa *she blushes* anyway Phillippa truth or dare?
Phillippa: Dare
Lucinda: I dare you to give Matt a lap dance but as you do you must strip
Phillippa: Ok
*she moves over to matt and start to grind his cock, as she did she took her bra, top skirt and panties off*
Matt: nice body phillippa *he mouths*
Phillippa: Truth or dare Ruby?
Ruby: Truth
Phillippa: Is it true you fancy Matt
Ruby: *Blushes* Yes it is. Ok time for a change, only dares allowed now, Lucinda i dare you to strip naked but make it sexy dance in the middle of the circle *she does a sexy dance like a stripper in a night club, *
Matt: Ruby i dare you to to do the sae as Lucinda
*she does excatly the same*
Lucinda: Matt i dare you to let us do whatever we want for 10 minutes

(what will be installed for Matt during these 10 minutes, what are the girls goint to do?, find out next time)

[will9022]

this story is good, but its moving too fast! add more detail in, and make it more like a story rather than a chatroom conversation

[The Judge]

great job so far but remember that grammer and spelling are key to a great case as well as a superb story

[cornylad]

Lucinda: Hey matt lie down
*as he does the girls tie his arms and legs to the tables and sofas*
Ruby: here you go *puts blindfold on Matt*
*the girls then get pegs and put them on matts nipples and balls*
Matt: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, that hurt girls
*the girls giggle then twist the pegs, Phillippa then sits on Matts face, Ruby starts to suck his cock but use her teeth to brush his cock*
Matt: mmmmmmmmmm that feels gd girls *he muffled into phillippa's pussi*
Girls: Good Glad you like *they say as they twists pegs again, they then grab a feather and start to tickle him as they do Phillippa and ruby gets up off matt.*
Matt: What u girls doing
Lucinda:Shut up we get to do what we like to you for 10 minutes *she slaps his belly hard*
Matt: sorry girls
*the 10 minutes finally pass, but it felt like an enternity to matt*
Matt: Ok girls how about doing dares as pairs
*the girls think for a moment then....*