Fiction: An Amazing Weekend For 4 Boys. - Page 4

Nick · 02-09-2010, 06:47 PM

this story is fantastic so far!
the next part better be big for keeping us wait like this!

surnamey · 02-10-2010, 10:06 PM

Let's get writing my good sir or lady

Playstation · 02-11-2010, 01:25 PM

Look's as though the story has been dropped.

will9022 · 02-11-2010, 01:42 PM

it wasnt dropped, hes just busy with school, like he said. and since he has off from school next week, he said he'll do more posts next week...

Jason242 · 02-16-2010, 06:51 PM

Part Nine

I leaned back, and lay flat on the carpet.
“Well Luke, Its time to have some fun. You spoiled my plan earlier and now it’s time for my revenge.” Cody said.
I was really nervous now. I knew what Cody wanted to do with Jake earlier, and I didn’t want any of his fantasies carried out on me.
“Listen Cody” I started. “I’m sorry I ruined your plan, I really didn’t mean to, honest”
“Luke, Luke, Luke. You don’t understand. I’m not angry with you, actually I’m quite happy. You see when you intervened you made me realise something. I’m not interested in Jake, I’m interested in you”
As Cody finished the sentence I felt a finger run up the sole of my right foot. It sent shivers up my spine.
“Cody, listen I’ll do whatever your dare is, but…”I began.
“Good. Then you wont mind staying still. Now don’t move a muscle” Cody replied.
Suddenly I felt a hand on my chest. It was resting on top of my left nipple. My blindness had heightened my others senses, and every touch felt tingly.

Roll,ova,and,beg · 02-16-2010, 09:30 PM

ooooo write more please

will9022 · 02-17-2010, 09:29 AM

great post! cannot wait for more!

glasssbottle174 · 02-17-2010, 09:42 AM

Great story. Keep up the good work

Jason242 · 02-21-2010, 12:49 AM

Part Ten

Slowly Cody’s hand travelled down the side of my chest. I could feel his finger tips pushing gently against my ribs. After what felt like an eternity, his hand reached my waist. I could feel his fingers clench around the bottom of my T-shirt.
“Cody, I..”.
“Shh..”.
I heard him take a deep breath. I did the same.
He began lifting my T-shirt, lingering at my belly button. When he got to my nipples he reached down either side of my body. Gently, Cody wrapped his hands around my wrists and raised my arms above my chest. Placing each arm on the carpet over my head.
His hands made their way back down to my nipples where they took hold of my T-shirt for the second time. Slightly faster, he continued to lift my T-shirt up over my head.
He exhaled, and I felt the warm air on my cheek. He was right in front of my face.
As he slid my shirt off of my arms, I felt slightly less anxious. I know longer seemed to mind what was happening. In fact I was enjoying it.
“Luke. I know you enjoyed that. You were smiling the whole time” Cody said excitedly.
“I..I was?”
“Luke it’s okay to have some fun every now and again you know!”
“Ya, I know I just…”
“Shh. No more talking” Cody said, as he pressed a finger against my lips.
I inhaled deeply, knowing that Cody was far from finished with me. I lay there for a while wondering what was going to happen. Cody didn’t seem to be doing anything.
I took another deep breath. The air was warm and moist.
He was right in front of my face again!
I licked my lips. Anxiously waiting for something to happen.
Then, very slowly I felt two lips gently press against my open mouth.
They were warm against my moist lips, and felt so soft.
I lay there, wondering what to do, when suddenly I felt a wet tongue press between my open lips!
I didn’t move. I was in shock.
Here I was lying in my best friends wardrobe, topless, with a boy in nothing but a pair of green briefs, sitting on top of me, and kissing me.
I wasn’t sure what to think. What to do, so I did the first thing that came to my head.
I kissed back!

ohne_id · 02-21-2010, 03:10 AM

wow, really great, please continue!

glasssbottle174 · 02-21-2010, 04:41 AM

Excellent, simply excellent

Irishbttm69 · 02-21-2010, 07:25 AM

Part #10 actually got me aroused. Can't wait for part #11!!! I hope it's soon.

glue · 02-21-2010, 08:42 AM

I need to recomment, LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!

9.9\10

Roll,ova,and,beg · 02-21-2010, 07:56 PM

its great and can't wait

Jellybones · 02-21-2010, 08:29 PM

Its really good I just hate waiting so long for posts that only take a minute or two to read. I want more!

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02-09-2010, 06:47 PM	#46
Nick Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Ohio Posts: 834	this story is fantastic so far! the next part better be big for keeping us wait like this! __________________ 27/ Male/ US/ Switch Likes: Underwear, Jockstrap, Embarrassing, Webcam or Pics, Naked, Semi-public, slight risk, strip games, dice dares, wedgies, clothing/cum control, anal, light humiliation Dislikes: Piss, Body Writing, messy Limits:Really public, family, friends, scat, gross, pain. *Impossible:* Crossdressing. I own NO girls clothes. kik: nick.undies Skype: nick.undies SnapChat: SnapNickR

02-10-2010, 10:06 PM	#47
surnamey Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Nebraska, USA Posts: 205	Let's get writing my good sir or lady __________________ Will do almost anything not in my limits Like: Hidden Public (especially at the gym) Limits: other people, permanent, illegal, messy, EXTREME pain and anything involving my own fluids or someone else's. I'm at Grad School now so feel free to send me dares involving that

02-11-2010, 01:25 PM	#48
Playstation Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 224	Look's as though the story has been dropped. __________________

02-16-2010, 06:51 PM	#50
Jason242 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Ireland Posts: 137	Part Nine I leaned back, and lay flat on the carpet. “Well Luke, Its time to have some fun. You spoiled my plan earlier and now it’s time for my revenge.” Cody said. I was really nervous now. I knew what Cody wanted to do with Jake earlier, and I didn’t want any of his fantasies carried out on me. “Listen Cody” I started. “I’m sorry I ruined your plan, I really didn’t mean to, honest” “Luke, Luke, Luke. You don’t understand. I’m not angry with you, actually I’m quite happy. You see when you intervened you made me realise something. I’m not interested in Jake, I’m interested in you” As Cody finished the sentence I felt a finger run up the sole of my right foot. It sent shivers up my spine. “Cody, listen I’ll do whatever your dare is, but…”I began. “Good. Then you wont mind staying still. Now don’t move a muscle” Cody replied. Suddenly I felt a hand on my chest. It was resting on top of my left nipple. My blindness had heightened my others senses, and every touch felt tingly. __________________ 18/m/Eire Check out my story! An Amazing Weekend For 4 Boys -------------------------------------------------------- Likes: Online TorD, Roleplay, Underwear play, Exposure, Masturbate Maybe:Mild pain, Anal play Dislike: Scat, pee, Loud, Messy, Out of room/Public, Showing face Spoiler: I'll play TorD online with most people(Skype ONLY, and with webcam!). PM me your ASL and Skype name. :D

02-11-2010, 01:42 PM	#49
will9022 Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New York, USA Posts: 156	it wasnt dropped, hes just busy with school, like he said. and since he has off from school next week, he said he'll do more posts next week...

02-16-2010, 09:30 PM	#51
Roll,ova,and,beg Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Canada Posts: 157	ooooo write more please

02-17-2010, 09:29 AM	#52
will9022 Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New York, USA Posts: 156	great post! cannot wait for more!

02-17-2010, 09:42 AM	#53
glasssbottle174 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 263	Great story. Keep up the good work

02-21-2010, 12:49 AM	#54
Jason242 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Ireland Posts: 137	Part Ten Slowly Cody’s hand travelled down the side of my chest. I could feel his finger tips pushing gently against my ribs. After what felt like an eternity, his hand reached my waist. I could feel his fingers clench around the bottom of my T-shirt. “Cody, I..”. “Shh..”. I heard him take a deep breath. I did the same. He began lifting my T-shirt, lingering at my belly button. When he got to my nipples he reached down either side of my body. Gently, Cody wrapped his hands around my wrists and raised my arms above my chest. Placing each arm on the carpet over my head. His hands made their way back down to my nipples where they took hold of my T-shirt for the second time. Slightly faster, he continued to lift my T-shirt up over my head. He exhaled, and I felt the warm air on my cheek. He was right in front of my face. As he slid my shirt off of my arms, I felt slightly less anxious. I know longer seemed to mind what was happening. In fact I was enjoying it. “Luke. I know you enjoyed that. You were smiling the whole time” Cody said excitedly. “I..I was?” “Luke it’s okay to have some fun every now and again you know!” “Ya, I know I just…” “Shh. No more talking” Cody said, as he pressed a finger against my lips. I inhaled deeply, knowing that Cody was far from finished with me. I lay there for a while wondering what was going to happen. Cody didn’t seem to be doing anything. I took another deep breath. The air was warm and moist. He was right in front of my face again! I licked my lips. Anxiously waiting for something to happen. Then, very slowly I felt two lips gently press against my open mouth. They were warm against my moist lips, and felt so soft. I lay there, wondering what to do, when suddenly I felt a wet tongue press between my open lips! I didn’t move. I was in shock. Here I was lying in my best friends wardrobe, topless, with a boy in nothing but a pair of green briefs, sitting on top of me, and kissing me. I wasn’t sure what to think. What to do, so I did the first thing that came to my head. I kissed back! __________________ 18/m/Eire Check out my story! An Amazing Weekend For 4 Boys -------------------------------------------------------- Likes: Online TorD, Roleplay, Underwear play, Exposure, Masturbate Maybe:Mild pain, Anal play Dislike: Scat, pee, Loud, Messy, Out of room/Public, Showing face Spoiler: I'll play TorD online with most people(Skype ONLY, and with webcam!). PM me your ASL and Skype name. :D

02-21-2010, 03:10 AM	#55
ohne_id Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Germany Posts: 196	wow, really great, please continue! __________________ 30 male from Germany Limits: public, messy, crossdressing, pee/poo, cum eating, illegal

02-21-2010, 04:41 AM	#56
glasssbottle174 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 263	Excellent, simply excellent

02-21-2010, 07:25 AM	#57
Irishbttm69 Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 97	Part #10 actually got me aroused. Can't wait for part #11!!! I hope it's soon.

02-21-2010, 08:42 AM	#58
glue Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oxford, UK Posts: 735 Blog Entries: 6	I need to recomment, LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!! 9.9\10 __________________ WATCH OUT FOR A GLUE RATING OUT OF TEN glue would like to tell everyone reading this to stay sticky as life is to short to become unstuck I'm the Simon Cowell of GetDare Please add me at: Skype: Glue101 8 Years On Getdare!!!!!!

02-21-2010, 07:56 PM	#59
Roll,ova,and,beg Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Canada Posts: 157	its great and can't wait

02-21-2010, 08:29 PM	#60
Jellybones Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 61	Its really good I just hate waiting so long for posts that only take a minute or two to read. I want more!