Haylee's Trip [fiction]

Hamishrules · 11-28-2009, 12:53 AM

this is just a small prologue, Please give comments and questions.

Chapter 1
Haylee opened up her phone after her text tone rang 'god, what now' Haylee says reading the text, it was from Kyle, Her boyfriend, She loved Kyle to bits but sometimes he was just so dang annoing. He wanted her to meet him out the back of the Hungry Jacks just down the road. She glanced at the clock, 3 hours to go, just enough time she thought as she grabbed her keys and ran out the door.

Hamishrules · 11-29-2009, 01:51 AM

Chapter 2
When Haylee arrived she got out of the car a walked around to the back of the restraunt. 'Kyle, where are you?' 'ah, you came, I just wanted to give you this before the trip' Kyle says handing Haylee and hot pink lingerie set. 'what, why?' she says, 'I just you to look good underneath' he says smiling as Haylee takes the set. 'are you excited' kyle asks Haylee. 'why should I, its just a school camp'. 'not just any school camp, the last school camp of our lives' says Kyle'
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Sorry for the shortness, but i didnt have much time, The lingerie set looks like this:
http://www.lalalingerie.com/images/l...nkskirtset.jpg

Sexybabe16 · 11-30-2009, 11:43 PM

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Maybe make posts longer!!

molten man · 12-04-2009, 01:25 AM

make the posts longer!!! good start, keep it going!!

Hamishrules · 12-04-2009, 05:59 PM

I try to make posts longer, but im caught up in other things

11-28-2009, 12:53 AM	#1
Hamishrules Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Australia Posts: 40	Haylee's Trip [fiction] this is just a small prologue, Please give comments and questions. Chapter 1 Haylee opened up her phone after her text tone rang 'god, what now' Haylee says reading the text, it was from Kyle, Her boyfriend, She loved Kyle to bits but sometimes he was just so dang annoing. He wanted her to meet him out the back of the Hungry Jacks just down the road. She glanced at the clock, 3 hours to go, just enough time she thought as she grabbed her keys and ran out the door.

12-04-2009, 01:25 AM	#4
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	make the posts longer!!! good start, keep it going!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

11-29-2009, 01:51 AM	#2
Hamishrules Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Australia Posts: 40	Chapter 2 When Haylee arrived she got out of the car a walked around to the back of the restraunt. 'Kyle, where are you?' 'ah, you came, I just wanted to give you this before the trip' Kyle says handing Haylee and hot pink lingerie set. 'what, why?' she says, 'I just you to look good underneath' he says smiling as Haylee takes the set. 'are you excited' kyle asks Haylee. 'why should I, its just a school camp'. 'not just any school camp, the last school camp of our lives' says Kyle' ================================================== === Sorry for the shortness, but i didnt have much time, The lingerie set looks like this: http://www.lalalingerie.com/images/l...nkskirtset.jpg

11-30-2009, 11:43 PM	#3
Sexybabe16 Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 64	MORE Maybe make posts longer!!

12-04-2009, 05:59 PM	#5
Hamishrules Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Australia Posts: 40	I try to make posts longer, but im caught up in other things