Fiction: It's About Love: An LGBT Story - Page 7

alex987 · 09-03-2011, 12:14 PM

Hoooooow have I been missing this story? *tsks self*
I love the plot of this one, it's really clever and seems well planned. Also, the writing is fantastic

So yeah

Saphir · 09-03-2011, 02:09 PM

Wooow how come I missed this story all the time. What a sin! Oo

I really love it. It's not only very romantic, sexy, etc. but it also has "the bad parts". Well... how to explain what I mean xD

It's not like everything is good and it's just about sex or love and nothing else, but it includes problems and they have to hold together to face them, etc. I think that makes this story very special and really worth reading.

I would really love to read more from this!
Hope the next chap is up soon.

Love

Daremeh · 09-14-2011, 07:09 PM

Absolutely amazing, I'm loving it so far can't wait for the next chapter! I feel so bad for Jake because he doesn't know who to choose Luke or Brendan...

gotdared · 09-14-2011, 07:36 PM

Aghh. I can't believe I've delayed this so long again XP I am so sorry! New chapter by the end of Friday, I PROMISE.
Thanks again for the support, I love you guys (:
-John

Kewai · 09-14-2011, 07:47 PM

Great to hear that there will be an update soon. Your writing It is worth the wait.
Love you John, Keep up the great work

Daremeh · 09-15-2011, 03:04 AM

Very good to hear that the next chapter will be put by friday! Take as long as you need on each chapter to make sure its the best possible thing you can write!

gotdared · 09-16-2011, 08:52 PM

Chapter 10
Part 1

Brendan went home and slumped down onto the couch. He couldn't take this. People that had seemed so cool, people so much like him, people he wanted as friends so badly now hated him. He felt so alone.

Then he remembered, he still had Ally and her friends. He decided to text her. He needed to be with someone right now, and she was the top candidate. Emma and Nicole were still cool too, but he enjoyed being with Ally most for some reason. She was less 'valley girl' type. Brendan pulled out his phone.

Hey Ally! Wanna come over and hang? I'm feelin kinda shitty and I could use a friend.

Brendan switched over to facebook for a few minutes. He typed Jakes name in the search bar and looked at his profile for the millionth time.

Brendan wanted Jake so bad, and now it seemed he would never have him, not even as a friend. He had to fix that.

His phone beeped. It was Ally:
Okay! I'm sure I can make you feel better

In about 15 minutes, the doorbell rang and Ally was at Brendan's doorstep. Brendan opened the door and was greeted by Ally in an even sluttier outfit that usual. At least half of her boobs were showing, and if she bent down, Brendan was pretty sure he'd get a full view of her ass. Not that he would really want that anyway.

"Hey Brendan," Ally said, walking right in.
"Uh, hi." Brendan said, still surprised by how she was dressed.
"So what's got you down?" She sat down on the couch, making herself at home.
"Just the whole Jake thing. I really liked him, and now he hates me." Brendan sighed and plopped down next to Ally.
"Aww, how could anyone hate you?" She put her hand on his cheek. "You're so adorable." She giggled.
Brendan smiled a little. "I just wish he would forgive me."
"Of course he will. You're too cute to stay mad at."
"Thanks, I just wish Jake felt that way."
Ally continued on, "If you werent gay, we could have so much fun." she moved her hand down over his chest.
Brendan didn't know why, but he was actually slightly turned on. He didn't see himself ever dating Ally, but in that moment he still wanted her.
"Yeah..."
"I just get this good feeling when I'm around you," Ally moved her hand lower.
"Maybe we can still have fun..." Brendan said.
Ally grinned. "I was hoping you'd say that." Then, without wasting any time, she leaned in to kiss him.

Maybe it was Ally's seductiveness, or just his depression searching for a rebound, but Brendan leaned in too.

Their lips met and Ally pushed Brendan down onto the cushions, laying on top of him. They continued making out for a while, then they began groping. Brendan didn't think a girl could turn him on like this. He loved it.

"Are you ready?" Ally said, then pulled a condom out of her bra.
___________

That was a super last minute update :P Hopefully you guys liked it. I'll try and get part 2 up this weekend! Also, just wondering, which characters/storylines would you like to see more of? (Jake/Luke, Brendan, Taylor, Lauren/Tyler)

-John

Kewai · 09-16-2011, 09:04 PM

Wow; That was bloody AMAZING dude!!!

Great update. I would like to see more of the Jake/Luke storyline, Just because it is what I am more interested, but if I could I would Vote for everything

Thanks for that update <3

alex987 · 09-17-2011, 12:34 AM

WOW
:O
o.O
What a plot twist!!

Daremeh · 09-17-2011, 04:30 AM

The plot takes a turn...I really enjoy this story so WRITE MORE

100th comment!!

Dylan xX · 09-17-2011, 08:50 AM

Actually bro, this is the 100th comment. (Edit, it says 101 here because the initial post counts, but on the outside of the story, this is the 100th :3)

Baby, only you could make me get out of bed when I'm practically too sick to move, turn on my computer, and comment on a story.

This comment isn't really about the one hell of a story you got here though, it's about you.

You're sweet, funny, nice, sensitive, cute, understanding, sexilicious, my best friend in the world... the list goes on.

I wub ya John, and I'm glad I could steal your 100th comment, but now you gotta make sure to steal my 1000th :3

<3 Dylsterr

gotdared · 09-17-2011, 08:59 AM

Dylan, have I ever told you that I FUCKING LOVE YOU MORE THAN ANYONE IN THE WORLD? Well, I do :3 It's an honor for you to have the 100th comment, and I'm definetly gonna get your 1,000th.
<3

Saphir · 09-17-2011, 01:22 PM

A bit fast (I would've taken some chapters to built up feelings and thoughts about this probably), but maybe that's just me.

Anyways, very nice, and hot.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Love

pymani96 · 09-18-2011, 01:56 PM

OH MY GOD! THIS IS FFFFFFFUCKKINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG OMAZINGGGGGGGGG!!!!!
i have nothing else to say
pymani

ursoweird123 · 09-18-2011, 07:37 PM

Sorry I took so long to reply John, my love. I'm so glad you're writing again. I love this story so much. Obviously I'm more interested in John and Luke, but anything you write is great. Take your time, though. Don't rush. I love you! I'll be starting up my story soon, too, again!

Love always,
Chad

P.S. I can't believe you said you lOved Dylan more than me. *goes and cries in a corner*

09-03-2011, 12:14 PM	#91
alex987 Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: not in North America ;P Posts: 93	Hoooooow have I been missing this story? tsks self I love the plot of this one, it's really clever and seems well planned. Also, the writing is fantastic So yeah __________________ 14/Male/American/German ^^ <3

09-14-2011, 07:36 PM	#94
gotdared Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: USA Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 2	Aghh. I can't believe I've delayed this so long again XP I am so sorry! New chapter by the end of Friday, I PROMISE. Thanks again for the support, I love you guys (: -John __________________ 13/Male/USA/Gay My stories: The Game of Bets (MxM Non-Fiction) [FINISHED] It's About Love (LGBT Fiction) [DISCONTINUED] If you are ages 13-16 and want to play truth or dare, ask me anything, or just talk send me a PM! So much more than a best friend. <3 tumblr

09-14-2011, 07:47 PM	#95
Kewai getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 372 Blog Entries: 8	Great to hear that there will be an update soon. Your writing It is worth the wait. Love you John, Keep up the great work __________________ 18/M/Bi/New Zealand

09-15-2011, 03:04 AM	#96
Daremeh Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: MA, USA Posts: 12	Very good to hear that the next chapter will be put by friday! Take as long as you need on each chapter to make sure its the best possible thing you can write! __________________ Male/14/MA, USA/Gay PM or add me if you want to say "Hello" it would be appreciated and if your nice enough it might just make my day

09-16-2011, 08:52 PM	#97
gotdared Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: USA Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 2	Chapter 10 Part 1 Brendan went home and slumped down onto the couch. He couldn't take this. People that had seemed so cool, people so much like him, people he wanted as friends so badly now hated him. He felt so alone. Then he remembered, he still had Ally and her friends. He decided to text her. He needed to be with someone right now, and she was the top candidate. Emma and Nicole were still cool too, but he enjoyed being with Ally most for some reason. She was less 'valley girl' type. Brendan pulled out his phone. Hey Ally! Wanna come over and hang? I'm feelin kinda shitty and I could use a friend. Brendan switched over to facebook for a few minutes. He typed Jakes name in the search bar and looked at his profile for the millionth time. Brendan wanted Jake so bad, and now it seemed he would never have him, not even as a friend. He had to fix that. His phone beeped. It was Ally: Okay! I'm sure I can make you feel better In about 15 minutes, the doorbell rang and Ally was at Brendan's doorstep. Brendan opened the door and was greeted by Ally in an even sluttier outfit that usual. At least half of her boobs were showing, and if she bent down, Brendan was pretty sure he'd get a full view of her ass. Not that he would really want that anyway. "Hey Brendan," Ally said, walking right in. "Uh, hi." Brendan said, still surprised by how she was dressed. "So what's got you down?" She sat down on the couch, making herself at home. "Just the whole Jake thing. I really liked him, and now he hates me." Brendan sighed and plopped down next to Ally. "Aww, how could anyone hate you?" She put her hand on his cheek. "You're so adorable." She giggled. Brendan smiled a little. "I just wish he would forgive me." "Of course he will. You're too cute to stay mad at." "Thanks, I just wish Jake felt that way." Ally continued on, "If you werent gay, we could have so much fun." she moved her hand down over his chest. Brendan didn't know why, but he was actually slightly turned on. He didn't see himself ever dating Ally, but in that moment he still wanted her. "Yeah..." "I just get this good feeling when I'm around you," Ally moved her hand lower. "Maybe we can still have fun..." Brendan said. Ally grinned. "I was hoping you'd say that." Then, without wasting any time, she leaned in to kiss him. Maybe it was Ally's seductiveness, or just his depression searching for a rebound, but Brendan leaned in too. Their lips met and Ally pushed Brendan down onto the cushions, laying on top of him. They continued making out for a while, then they began groping. Brendan didn't think a girl could turn him on like this. He loved it. "Are you ready?" Ally said, then pulled a condom out of her bra. ___________ That was a super last minute update :P Hopefully you guys liked it. I'll try and get part 2 up this weekend! Also, just wondering, which characters/storylines would you like to see more of? (Jake/Luke, Brendan, Taylor, Lauren/Tyler) -John __________________ 13/Male/USA/Gay My stories: The Game of Bets (MxM Non-Fiction) [FINISHED] It's About Love (LGBT Fiction) [DISCONTINUED] If you are ages 13-16 and want to play truth or dare, ask me anything, or just talk send me a PM! So much more than a best friend. <3 tumblr Last edited by gotdared; 09-17-2011 at 08:00 AM.

09-03-2011, 02:09 PM	#92
Saphir getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 425	Wooow how come I missed this story all the time. What a sin! Oo I really love it. It's not only very romantic, sexy, etc. but it also has "the bad parts". Well... how to explain what I mean xD It's not like everything is good and it's just about sex or love and nothing else, but it includes problems and they have to hold together to face them, etc. I think that makes this story very special and really worth reading. I would really love to read more from this! Hope the next chap is up soon. Love

09-14-2011, 07:09 PM	#93
Daremeh Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: MA, USA Posts: 12	Absolutely amazing, I'm loving it so far can't wait for the next chapter! I feel so bad for Jake because he doesn't know who to choose Luke or Brendan...

09-16-2011, 09:04 PM	#98
Kewai getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 372 Blog Entries: 8	Wow; That was bloody AMAZING dude!!! Great update. I would like to see more of the Jake/Luke storyline, Just because it is what I am more interested, but if I could I would Vote for everything Thanks for that update <3 __________________ 18/M/Bi/New Zealand

09-17-2011, 12:34 AM	#99
alex987 Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: not in North America ;P Posts: 93	WOW :O o.O What a plot twist!! __________________ 14/Male/American/German ^^ <3

09-17-2011, 04:30 AM	#100
Daremeh Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: MA, USA Posts: 12	The plot takes a turn...I really enjoy this story so WRITE MORE 100th comment!! __________________ Male/14/MA, USA/Gay PM or add me if you want to say "Hello" it would be appreciated and if your nice enough it might just make my day

09-17-2011, 08:50 AM	#101
Dylan xX Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: U.S.A Posts: 934 Blog Entries: 7	Actually bro, this is the 100th comment. (Edit, it says 101 here because the initial post counts, but on the outside of the story, this is the 100th :3) Baby, only you could make me get out of bed when I'm practically too sick to move, turn on my computer, and comment on a story. This comment isn't really about the one hell of a story you got here though, it's about you. You're sweet, funny, nice, sensitive, cute, understanding, sexilicious, my best friend in the world... the list goes on. I wub ya John, and I'm glad I could steal your 100th comment, but now you gotta make sure to steal my 1000th :3 <3 Dylsterr __________________ Gone

09-17-2011, 08:59 AM	#102
gotdared Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: USA Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 2	Dylan, have I ever told you that I FUCKING LOVE YOU MORE THAN ANYONE IN THE WORLD? Well, I do :3 It's an honor for you to have the 100th comment, and I'm definetly gonna get your 1,000th. <3 __________________ 13/Male/USA/Gay My stories: The Game of Bets (MxM Non-Fiction) [FINISHED] It's About Love (LGBT Fiction) [DISCONTINUED] If you are ages 13-16 and want to play truth or dare, ask me anything, or just talk send me a PM! So much more than a best friend. <3 tumblr

09-17-2011, 01:22 PM	#103
Saphir getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 425	A bit fast (I would've taken some chapters to built up feelings and thoughts about this probably), but maybe that's just me. Anyways, very nice, and hot. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Love

09-18-2011, 01:56 PM	#104
pymani96 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: - Posts: 354	OH MY GOD! THIS IS FFFFFFFUCKKINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG OMAZINGGGGGGGGG!!!!! i have nothing else to say pymani

09-18-2011, 07:37 PM	#105
ursoweird123 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: New York, NY, US Posts: 243	Sorry I took so long to reply John, my love. I'm so glad you're writing again. I love this story so much. Obviously I'm more interested in John and Luke, but anything you write is great. Take your time, though. Don't rush. I love you! I'll be starting up my story soon, too, again! Love always, Chad P.S. I can't believe you said you lOved Dylan more than me. goes and cries in a corner __________________ Check out my story Fashion of His Love About Me: Hey! My name's Chad. I'm 21 and gay from North Carolina (currently living in NYC). I like to believe that I am a pretty chill dude. I never judge anyway. I'm always there for my friends when they need me. I love chatting! PM me (if you're not a creeper)! I love making new friends! Interested in having a master maybe! Love! Slave Tumblr: chadtheslave.tumblr.com Best Friends --<3Nate<3John<3Dylan<3Carl<3--