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Norse Fire · 04-15-2009, 01:02 PM

This is a really good story. The only critical thing I have to say is just to ease up on the swearing a bit to add emphasis for when you do use it.

P.S. Where did you get your inspiration for this character?

04-15-2009, 01:02 PM	#15
Norse Fire Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: USA Posts: 214	This is a really good story. The only critical thing I have to say is just to ease up on the swearing a bit to add emphasis for when you do use it. P.S. Where did you get your inspiration for this character?