i realise the charecter is supposed to be young, fair enough, but 8 is just abit too young, maby 12 or 13, still young enough for him too be uncomfortable, and her to be curious, but at the same time, less... wrong if you know what i mean
oh and, other than the age thing im quite enjoying it, please go on, even if you dont want to change the age, i can ignore that
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Last edited by Smile; 01-15-2009 at 05:39 PM.
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